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by Angel From My Nightmare
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As I motion around in my bedroom,
Specious paradox thumps in my head.
Forming puddles on ragged thread,
Cascaded tears founder steep doom.

Clouds cottoned by nebulous gloom,
Shadowed blankets of words unsaid.
As I motion around in my bedroom,
Specious paradox thumps in my head.

A medley of sparse whispers flumed,
To reach you my nervous hands vacillate.
Metallic blood leaches to asphyxiate,
Exuding hope is amplifying to bloom,
As I motion around in my bedroom.

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A French form consisting of 13 lines: two quatrains and a quintet, rhyming as follows:
ABba abAB abbaA. The capital letters are the refrains, or repeats.
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' Please correct me where I'm wrong, it's my first Rondel.




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